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Post by sk8theshizz on Jan 8, 2008 18:28:36 GMT -5
1) Sk8TheShizz 2) Head of Class: Dueling Class 3) In Cheebies Hogwarts but now shut down 4) Because I have experience in HP RPGS and I know how to duel 5) Detention 6) Yes I have the time i'm on like all the time and I would report the teachers if the act continues but forst offence i would watch their teachings to help them do it right 7) Defence Spells 8) I Hope You Make The Right Choic :]
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Post by luke163 on Jan 9, 2008 15:58:59 GMT -5
Not supported not enough.
And you spelled choice wrong.
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Post by Ashley pwns you. Sorry. on Jan 16, 2008 5:57:52 GMT -5
Not supported. Reasons: • Much too short. • In the template, you're supposed to write out a whole lesson that you'd do, not just "defence spells" • Only detention? Gee, I'd love to come to your class. I'd make trouble the whole class and get myself a lot of detention, then easily get out of it. • Not a good enough reason in the 4th question. Almost everybody in HPRPG knows how to duel, there's a difference between knowing how to duel and dueling well. • HPRPGS? You only said you had experience in 1 HPRPG. • It looks VERY bad when people use the last section to say "I hope you make the right choice" and that comes in almost every application. It's just like saying 'I hope you pick me' or pressuring them to pick you AKA the "right" choice. I guess staff are used to this, but I just felt like pointing it out.
Note: You spelled first and choice wrong.
EDIT: Oh my. My post is longer than your application.
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